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| Open Poetry #33 |
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Ivory Epiphany |
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Darker Season Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 48Wisconsin |
Here's another song I've written that will never be heard... Ivory Epiphany ************************ Oh…It was our symphony and an empty refrain Playing the notes of desire and pain Simple and deep…so simple and deep Begging for us to remember and keep… Eachother, Eachother inside of this light Knowing forever it just isn't right 'Cause you can’t hear these words without feeling this way No, you can’t steal my voice and expect me to say To say… Freedom and wonder and love are the same Heartache and worries and tears are a shame Sing it to me Sing it to me Ivory Epiphany Pounding your fingers on top of the keys Crushing so softly these dead memories Screaming the sound…oh, screaming the sound Begging for us to remember we found… Eachother, Eachother inside of this light Knowing forever it just isn’t right 'Cause you can’t hear these words without feeling this way No, you can’t steal my voice and expect me to say To say… Freedom and wonder and love are the same Heartache and worries and tears are a shame Sing it to me Sing it to me Ivory Epiphany The curtain is closing this one final time But you never realize and notice that I'm I’m trying to say Freedom and wonder and love are the same Heartache and worries and tears are a shame I’ll sing it to you If you would just sing it to me Sing it to me Delicately Sing it to me Ivory Epiphany Ivory Oh, Ivory Epiphany I'll sing it to you [This message has been edited by Darker Season (09-10-2004 09:08 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a fantastic song! Beautifully done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Started to go through it and stopped. Yes it is quality. Cut of my thoughts below of the first few lines. Dave Deep Music to remember to bury for ourselves but forcing our emotions to this darkens our passion and you are frightened to say Freedom and wonder and love are the same Heartache and worries and tears are a shame |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think it's a good song |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write..would love to hear it put to music! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I think you are a great songwriter! You should put it to music..I write songs as well! This was great! ~Love and hugs ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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