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changing nothing, but the words |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
I was once Glistening Rain and now shining wind haze permeates the droplets of my brown eyes watch the twist of white and blue shapes my heart is a love potion grips a part of my soul motioning an ocean to my groaning voice like lotion on the back of tanned flesh I kept in hands that crept like snakes that wed themselves to lust grabs me tightly in the hands of teeth so sharply gazing straight into this crazy realm of earth inside I hurt but people make me laugh the aftermath is sadness then I'm mad with tears I laugh again wondering what I'm crying for |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"shapes my heart is a love potion grips a part of my soul motioning an ocean to my groaning voice like lotion" Nice rhyming........jo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
All I can say is Wow. :-) |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
I appreciate your encouragement. - Haze |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the insight |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Poetry helps to release some of that hurt that is captured on the inside...but outside no one ever sees it... ~love and hugs ~ARh  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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