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Open Poetry #33

Alone I feel

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2004-09-09 04:29 PM

Alone I feel
as the night begins
an empty bed
and a chilling wind

Without you here
my heart bleeds tears
Days seem so very long
as if they were years

The quietness screams
the phone never rings
Things just aren't the same
My friend I need

Alone I feel
from minute to minute
My life isn't complete
Without you in it

So alone,
So cold
these loving arms
with no one to hold

My eye's, never dry
My heart, always aches
The memory of you
through life I take

Through life
Through pain
The love I have
Will always remains

sim0riah

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2004-09-09 04:31 PM

i feel this one

totally understand
sad but good

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-09 05:12 PM

Yes I like it

I would love to see how you write in five or six years

Not a criticism just an observation

Yes

Dave

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

3 posted 2004-09-10 11:58 AM

Thanks both of you

Dave I agree I see so much great stuff here sometimes i feel mine is a little short of something

sim0riah

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-09-10 05:22 PM

You are never alone when in the company of friends at PIP~

I could feel your loneliness and sadness at the same time.

~Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

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