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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-09-04 01:27 AM

Three simple words is all I speak,
No fancy ode, nor phrase oblique,
She is beautiful, for that is all
That need be said; my heart’s enthrall
Is beauty rare beyond compare,
These simple words, I do declare.

No sonnet do I need recite,
No song I sing, or letter write
Of her pulchritude to profess,
For she is beauty, no more no less,
Three modest words to her portray,
She is beautiful, need all I say.

She is beautiful; no more need be said,
no flowery rhymes of roses red,
nor madrigals from gods on high
that sing of stars in midnight’s sky,
for she is beauty, no less no more,
a beauty she, my heart’s adore.

© Copyright 2004 Tim - All Rights Reserved

passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-09-04 04:59 AM

very nice love poem

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-09-04 08:12 AM

I do believe
you own a
license on
love poems, Sir!

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-09-04 10:05 AM

for she is beauty, no less no more,
a beauty she, my heart’s adore.

Perfect !! Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-09-04 11:19 AM

Sigh . . . no more need be said, you're heart is plain.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2004-09-09 06:06 PM

I second Susan's sigh

What beauty your words hold...inspiring as always

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2004-09-10 05:10 PM

Ah..but the beauty of your words are more beautiful than the muse that inspired them.

~Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

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