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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2004-09-09 11:14 AM


Do you hear the geese flying over?
I think it is a sign of cooler weather.
Last night, they sang long and loud,
causing my mind to take excursions
beyond my doors and windows.
Would that I could gather up on wings
and sail away to you . . .
Did you hear me sing to you last night?
Could you feel the beat of my heart?
In the mixture of these thoughts,
I long for a new season.



© Copyright 2004 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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OH
1 posted 2004-09-09 11:21 AM


Nicely done... a pleasure to read.
          miscellanea

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-09 12:45 PM


Sounds like the fear of a hard winter.

Yes I wish I could fly to sunnier climes.

Nice words, to the point, yes good.

Dave

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-09-09 01:01 PM


Very nicely done Robert.
I very much enjoy reading you!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-09-09 01:58 PM


I long for a new season too..one without rain and humidity and heat...


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Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-09 02:24 PM


And I would bid the summer stay.  Though I love Fall, it leads into Winter.

Enjoyed - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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Louisiana
6 posted 2004-09-09 02:37 PM


Ohhhhh... I like this very much! *S* Well done!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2004-09-09 02:37 PM


Oh, this was seasoned JUST right!
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2004-09-09 04:39 PM


this is the first year in my life that...i have been looking forward to sweaters...!!!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2004-09-10 05:24 PM


WOW! I could hear loud and clear...and it was beautiful, pleasing to my hearts ear!

~love and hugs
~ARH


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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