»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #33
»
Unchained
| Open Poetry #33 |
|
Unchained |
|
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
|
Unchained I am floating air ribald comfort blood aware a song in tune of effortless my fingers graceful glee no less All stress is floating balloons in flight and to dream it like I remember is what I’ll do tonight the flying like a dance and I a ballerina rare in curve and line I’m there already gone across the dusk that leaves me sitting here in my unchained chair relieved |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved | |||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Care to share the next dance, seeing as how you have just fluttered and flitted about for a little while.... |
||
|
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Martie.. just fabulous and the imagery..marvelous! hugs m'dear friend. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
An uplift to my evening, Martie! |
||
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
to fly . . . even if not away quietly in the ease of air e |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I much enjoyed this! "A spring shower was cause to run |
||
|
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It seems that you are envisioning things that no longer are. This is a wonderful find on an early morning. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie The write and you are a delight.  |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All stress is floating balloons in flight and to dream it like I remember is what I’ll do tonight ~*~ You know how... but you're good enough to show the rest of us why... |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am floating air ribald comfort blood aware a song in tune of effortless my fingers graceful glee no less ================================== oh you aint neva lied.  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
||
|
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You put joy in my heart this morning. Thank you. |
||
|
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Love the way you handle this....you floating in the poem's direction, with bits and parts of you escaping to dance little fancys of their own for a moment before they return to you....beautiful stuff. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Quietly admiring the word-art of you~ 'All stress is floating balloons in flight and to dream it like I remember is what I’ll do tonight' Oh ... yes~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, I love the peaceful and serene feel of this. Just beautiful, sweet lady.  Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"All stress is floating balloons in flight" ~ I often imagine this myself! Up and up and away my stresses go! ~ into the ethers to let the Universe deal with them! lol  May you always be unchained and unencumbered by the stresses in life! Linda |
||
|
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - I just never tire of reading your poetry and treveling with your words to places of wonder. You say things so very well - Paul |
||
|
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Martie, I just had to bring this back up again. It's so pretty, filled with hope. A treat to read! miscellanea |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It sounds as though some great burden has been lifted, Martie! This has a wonderful sense of peace about it. Corinne |
||
|
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I’m there already gone across the dusk that leaves me sitting here in my unchained chair relieved" The degree between being unchained and being free is often wider than we wish. Enjoyed much Martie...  |
||
|
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Waiter, could you bring me some of what she's having? Memory IS a renewable energy.. again! |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
|
||
|
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And to think I nearly missed this. Fly high Martie - life's beautiful when we leave the stress behind. |
||
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ahhh to feel this way....lovely Martie! I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now I know why you like flowers so much! It is because you are a butterfly!  Linda |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ethereal and yet so real in its feel of freedom. Very beautiful. Love, Margherita |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was tremendous Martie |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...to be unchained |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and to dream it like I remember... a wonderful line of thought ~smiling~ M |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
