Open Poetry #33 |
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The Best Of Me |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
I gave to you the all of me beneath the elm aside the babbling stream. I left for you my destiny as the winds did carry you to my dreams. A dream of love and passion’s heat to boil the fires of chilling winter nights. A dream of hope and wishes three where once a kiss did fuel the torches bright. As lovers dance an oaken vat To sip the cup beneath four shining eyes. And vines still climb the trellis white in search the shedding snows from mountains high. For when the spring brings forth the mist of morning air and birds that fill the skies, I’ll give to you the best of me before the moon awakes to lover’s sighs. And from this humble best of me A dream shall come to rest within your breast. As lovers live in ecstacy beside the hearth in fantasy and rest. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry, I sit here and try to think what to say, but it is so hard, for your words carry beauty and the sigh of heart, the romance of lovers, the feel of a warm kiss. A lovely piece, ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There was no way that I was going to miss out on reading the "Best of" YOU! You certainly do have a way with words! ![]() Enjoy your evening! ~ and your night! EA |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
sighing here ![]() Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm with my sister here Barry....sighing!! ![]() Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There were two sisters of Sighsville who sighed at the words his pen wrote. They were two beauties, not rivals living up north, floating a boat.... They sighed so loud a quake was felt as far as one could see or drive. The sound so loud, ice cream did melt as the temperature went to one oh five. thanx girs......as always.... Susan, I am pleased that you have enjoyed the writings that my mind dreams up and plasters on the blue walls....with so much talent at Pip, it becomes easier...you are no exception....and I am putting a lock on all of the knives in my house..... And Linda, our resident Angel...thanx dear lady....I would never miss something you might have said.... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm adding another sigh to this list, BJ. Also, enjoyed your poem to our sisters! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are one of the best, indeed! I hope she knows it Barry~ ![]() |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes indeed...You always give the best of yourself and that is what makes you the wonderful person you are...I am glad I didn't miss this one...**hugs** my friend... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I'm proud to be your friend and fellow poet ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such words...beautiful Barry! I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
a beauty indeed ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry, this was tremendous |
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