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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-07-09 10:44 PM

Pastimes

There you lay, sated,
Under summers’ sun beams
And I realize
Between want and seems,

That summer is running
Far and away from us,
From you and me, as
Another year will slip on by

And I am only
In your mind
A shadow found
In keep of time

And there we lay
As sand comes to play
On common grounds

Upon past’s wind…

                                God keep me and summer’s trust
                                            That I will warm again one love

Or so the Sun says to the earth
Where all is treasured in loving birth…

And one’s hovering,
Hear angels’ wings
In hark of all…
And  the playing of strings…

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-09 10:47 PM

Oooooohhhh, I love this. I am right there on the same wave length tonight.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-07-09 10:48 PM

Please lend me your muse Karilea.
Yours seems to be working overtime lately!
How lovely is this then?!!!
Another keeper for sure. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Fagin
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 126
Ca

3 posted 2004-07-10 02:44 AM

Beauty Sis

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

4 posted 2004-07-10 08:00 AM

That summer is running
Far and away from us,
From you and me, as
Another year will slip on by

So well said!

This surely trumpeted awareness to me. Where are these days going? KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-07-10 09:40 AM

When the sun speaks... we all feel the warm of summer.

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-07-10 12:22 PM

"And there we lay
As sand comes to play
On common grounds

Upon past’s wind…

God keep me and summer’s trust
That I will warm again one love"

I too feel the summer rushing by....
There is a sweet ache here.
Love this dear Karilea...
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-07-10 01:54 PM

Simply beautiful!

Eric

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

8 posted 2004-07-10 10:02 PM

What a wonderful penning! Such description of dreamlike visions definitely puts a smile on my face, thank you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2004-11-05 01:31 PM

how'd I miss this?

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

10 posted 2004-11-05 09:27 PM

amazing write karilea....

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

11 posted 2004-11-10 09:16 PM

dear karilea,

just writing this letter to inform you that i have read your poem and i am quite elated to inform that i found it to be of your usual top notch caliber, worthy of the highest and most sincere praises.. this poem emanates your very name and that makes it ever so more beautiful

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