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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2004-08-01 11:06 PM

make love to my mind
crawl inside
darkness beckons
cobweb binds, my hands and mouth
come be my muse
entrap me
wrap me
with obtuse, notions
diamonds
glittering snow
follow me darling
we'll be late for the show
I have paid your fare
no need for excuse
just fall into my mind
let me be your muse

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-08-01 11:22 PM

I'll drink to that! Enjoyed much!
misc'e

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-08-01 11:29 PM

"make love to my mind"

~ I absolutely adore that line!

For me, that is where it all starts!

EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-08-01 11:31 PM

Yes, I hear this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-08-02 03:57 AM

Ceinwyn -- I think you found the muse alright.

Great write. ......jo

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

5 posted 2004-08-04 03:18 PM

*SmilinG*

This makes me want to reverse the spelling of dog...

Well done, Ceinwyn.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-08-04 07:49 PM

Well done! enjoyed this one.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

7 posted 2004-11-07 07:49 AM

perfect....i love reading your stuff

in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are.

zippi
Member

since 2004-03-31

Posts 56
California

8 posted 2004-11-08 06:07 PM

Now…when all the lights are out
And not a fool can see.
Now…when it could matter less
My tongue has been set free.
My imagination’s soaring
I feel like I could sing.
With no one here to notice
My soul has taken wing.
Perhaps that’s how it’s meant to be,
With no audience around.
Perhaps just like that fallen tree
A soul still makes a sound.
And so, I sing to darkness
Without a single ear
I whisper dreams of childhood
With no one there to here.
I share a smile with emptiness
And fill the room with knowing
That even with no eye to see
My naked soul is showing.
www.InnerCirclePublishing.com

This poem was great fun, your's I mean!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2004-11-08 07:35 PM

Ha! Where have you been?
*grinning*

I miss him too . . .

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2004-11-10 08:14 PM

With that title and then that first line I knew this would be interesting. It is. I like it. Y'know, I could use a new muse...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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