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Glistening Rain
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Glistening Rain |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
I was once Glistening Rain and now shining wind haze permeates the droplets of my brown eyes watch the twist of white and blue shapes my heart is a love potion grips a part of my soul motioning an ocean to my groaning voice like lotion on the back of tanned flesh I kept in hands that crept like snakes that wed themselves to lust grabs me tightly in the hands of teeth so sharply gazing straight into this crazy realm of earth inside I hurt but people make me laugh the aftermath is sadness then I'm mad with tears I laugh again wondering what I'm crying for - Haze |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
you have a unique voice and a way with imagery. I find myself re-reading to try to capture all that your words carry. Susan  Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShiningWind, Come back a year from now and read it again, you will be surprised. Enjoyed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I will freely admit that at some point after the first few versus I coasted. Emotion ran rampant in the early words, I lost a bit after. The vision I can follow, the later intensity of the words I found clouded the ealier direction. regards Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I think you have a twin. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I was once Glistening Rain and now shining wind haze permeates the droplets of my brown eyes" I soooo love this part  |
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