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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-08 04:03 PM



Cattail Looming


on the edge of the cattails
there is a fabric glimmer
it wasn’t there yesterday
appearing overnight with moon
a diamond rise with sun sparkle
and there it hangs in lift
silken silver threads catching me
attached to a tie that binds
in weave of purpose design
setting my dreams in spin

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-09-08 04:08 PM


Beautiful Helen..
You're hitting them right on target today!!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
2 posted 2004-09-08 04:09 PM


Lovely title and poem!  Cattails can very beautiful!
                miscellanea

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