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MyHeartofShadows
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Hyattsville, MD

0 posted 2004-09-13 09:13 PM


My Mood might be sad, but I could easily laugh out loud,
Thoughts of you return, both good and bad times.
I might ponder for moments on end
And spill them onto a rhyme,
But the night grows late
And dishes await,
Then bed and dreams of you,
Hugging a pillow that held your head
The whole night through.



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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-09-13 09:34 PM


Such a beautiful yet sad write..
Very beautifully penned.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2004-09-13 09:45 PM


I agree with Nancy.  So beautiful, yet so sad.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

MyHeartofShadows
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Hyattsville, MD
3 posted 2004-09-13 10:05 PM


Thanx to both you lovely ladies

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-09-14 01:05 AM


beautiful write here
froggy
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5 posted 2004-09-14 01:47 AM


Beautiful
Beautifully written

I like it

:-)


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