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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-09-13 09:06 PM


fingers darting across the guitar
spreading like fire
wildfire
scorching my soul
music for the passionate
it flows through my ears
like a cool breeze on a warm night
moving me.
this music
this form of invisable art
speaks for you
speaks for generations
of lost youth
searching for themselves
hoping beyond hope
this musical breeze
hold answers.

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MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04
Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD
1 posted 2004-09-13 09:20 PM


I don’t play, but enjoy watching an artist, your words are as expressive as the any player’s.  Really enjoyed.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-09-14 01:06 AM


nice
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2004-09-14 01:37 AM


Wow is all I can say

:-)

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado
4 posted 2004-09-14 01:44 AM


Wonderful. The ending kinda reminds me of some lines from John Mellencamp's 'Check It Out': "a billion young poets, screaming out their words, to a world full of people just living to be heard."
Great write, exhale. Makes me wonder what kind of songs you'd write.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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