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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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fingers darting across the guitar spreading like fire wildfire scorching my soul music for the passionate it flows through my ears like a cool breeze on a warm night moving me. this music this form of invisable art speaks for you speaks for generations of lost youth searching for themselves hoping beyond hope this musical breeze hold answers. |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
I don’t play, but enjoy watching an artist, your words are as expressive as the any player’s. Really enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wow is all I can say :-) |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Wonderful. The ending kinda reminds me of some lines from John Mellencamp's 'Check It Out': "a billion young poets, screaming out their words, to a world full of people just living to be heard." Great write, exhale. Makes me wonder what kind of songs you'd write. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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