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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2004-09-08 06:23 AM


Snow fell into the echoing
white dream.She stirred
in her sleep, he stood
watching in silence over her.

On the road the car steamed
in the chill air, snow falling silent
he looked at her softly sighing,
smashed, upsidedown, the car lay.

Peering at her slumbering form,
he touched her goodbye.
Explosion, inferno, flames burning,
lurching from sleep, she saw him go.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-09-08 07:05 AM


Very sad and chilling...more like a nightmare..instead of a dream...

one dream I don't want to become a reality...goodbyes of anykind are too painful to deal with...exspecially ones of death...forever.
We can't control dreams or car accidents...but we can control today by our choices to love or not to love...

Love ~ARH

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-08 03:03 PM


You have a talent that I dont think people understand

You feel, understand, migrate the reality to realness in words.

Dave

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