Open Poetry #33 |
There, Beyond, and Back Again |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There, Beyond, and Back Again It was simple enough for flights of fancy to whisk me away, that morning, in my want of following the moon into its depths of tomorrow, to its somewhere else. I would pursue it, its travels, to see what it sees, if tasks of normality [?] didn’t chase after me, nipping at my heels, and I wondered at those who can slip off or better yet, shrug away accountability, for I would go to where the moon goes, and my thoughts slipped the day in that unsayable process, Yes, it is time to observe, again So in feeling these, my muse tones, a walkabout was required when noon’s hour fell under me soon enough, and what I would see, was anyone’s guess; how I would perceive those sights, still known only to my muse. So when I observed these flags, I knew…I knew I thought of the moon again, and in its travels, what it would see, still out there I saw that vision as three of the flags flew free, Country, State, City, and my mind/heart aching, for the P.O.W. flag wound, bound around its staff, unable to fly free, a reminder to me, the one who would feel it as a remembrance of those who did not return home, and can only be seen, somewhere else, by my own moon’s glow. And like the moon, I continue to carry their memory with me, through all my steps, through all my prayers. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As they will always remain in mine as well Karilea. Beautiful heartfelt write here dear lady. Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"It was simple enough for flights of fancy to whisk me away, that morning, in my want of following the moon into its depths of tomorrow, to its somewhere else." this part here... loved it... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Through an expansive walkabout you've taken me, through wonder and through pain and back to hope. You words stretch my mind. I'm so glad I'm coming to know you. missie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional write dear Sunshine. You open the mind to amazing places. TD |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Poignant. It is indeed poignant. Thank you for remembering and sharing in such a meaningful way. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This stirs the heart- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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And like the moon, I continue to carry their memory with me, through all my steps, through all my prayers. Amen! Yer Beautiful Sunshinygirl. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Oh, this was especially meaningful to me. I think of all those serving in Iraq right now. My son was sitting on the Kuwaiti border for 4 months waiting to go into Iraq with his hospital unit. For whatever reason, his unit did not end up going in; but I can feel for those whose sons and daughters did go in and are missing or have made the ultimate sacrifice. And, I think of all the veterans past and future who may be looking at the same moon but cannot fly their cage or will not see these home shores ever again. Excellent work, Sunshine. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"So in feeling these, my muse tones, a walkabout was required when noon’s hour fell under me soon enough, and what I would see, was anyone’s guess; how I would perceive those sights, still known only to my muse." Oh, I love the way good poetry rolls off my tongue.... How it makes more than verbal vibration when read out loud.... How it is much more than words spoken How it sounds like a song... All of these are in this poem... ----------ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I saw that vision as three of the flags flew free, Country, State, City, and my mind/heart aching, for the P.O.W. flag wound, bound around its staff, unable to fly free, a reminder to me, the one who would feel it as a remembrance of those who did not return home, and can only be seen, somewhere else, by my own moon’s glow. Oh, lady... this one's squeeze to the heart is no less intense for its gentleness. *S* Beautiful, touching work! *S* |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nice I enjoyed it. sm0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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A powerful tribute. Eric |
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Nightshade
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Posts 13962just out of reach |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Beautiful, beautiful..... in conception and in execution! ~~J [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (09-08-2004 05:49 PM).] |
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