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Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2004-09-07 04:06 PM

breath comes on a sigh
with kiss of passionate flame
leaving melted thoughts ~

.
.
.
Chris Barker
Sept. 7, 2004
~~~~~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-09-07 04:13 PM

Chris,
How charming.

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

2 posted 2004-09-07 04:44 PM

You know I can think of many kisses of the past and they put belief in these words you have written

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-07 04:50 PM

Lovely Chris...very nicely done!
~Hugs, love and miss ya!~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-09-07 06:34 PM

Thanks & Hugs poets three !!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-09-07 08:34 PM

Vewy vewy nice....yep! Most cointenly...

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-09-07 08:38 PM

Oh, yes, Chris! Now that is a kiss remembered, I'm sure!

....jo

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

7 posted 2004-09-07 08:40 PM

Thoughts that fade into happiness and thoughtlessness, From a kiss. This was a gorgeous write. Short, sweet, and so true.

- Haze

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-09-07 08:42 PM

Oooooh- love this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2004-09-07 08:44 PM

Surely does...perfect Chris.
TD

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2004-09-07 09:06 PM

thankyou all so much.

Hugs!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

11 posted 2004-09-07 10:19 PM

Chris,

  This is perfection at its best!


breath comes on a sigh
with kiss of passionate flame
leaving melted thoughts ~

  I don't think I have many, if any senryus in my library, but NOW I have one!  Thanks for this beauty!

              miscellanea

Nightshade

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Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2004-09-07 11:06 PM

What a lovely compliment misc. - thankyou!

Margot
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since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

13 posted 2004-09-07 11:28 PM

Chris,

Absolutely beautiful

Margot

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2004-09-08 12:34 PM

Lovely...James

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

15 posted 2004-09-08 01:18 AM

Oh I do love those thoughts

Enjoyed this Chris..

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2004-09-08 02:03 AM

Now that's what I call a melt down!

Thanks for the warm fuzzies, Chris~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

17 posted 2004-09-08 07:12 AM

Kisses that break ice
Foggy morns greet breeze of fall
Somewhere one is warm

~&~

And Nightshade inspires, again.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

18 posted 2004-09-08 07:14 AM

ahhhh, soft and sweet
the kiss of fond memories

beautifully felt

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

19 posted 2004-09-08 08:28 AM

whooohooo. you are sizzling gal! Love this!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

20 posted 2004-09-08 09:46 AM

Thankyou all for the wonderful comments!
Hugs!

Karilea - that's awesome. You know that I love it when/if I can inspire another.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

21 posted 2004-09-09 10:11 AM

Oh yeah, great ending line. Lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

22 posted 2004-09-09 10:15 AM

Thankyou Nan!!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

23 posted 2004-09-09 11:10 AM

Hiya Chris

what a lovely sigh and melt....beautiful--hugsss you

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

24 posted 2004-09-09 11:37 AM

yes, this is what a kiss should be!

Rf

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

25 posted 2004-09-09 12:23 PM

enjoyed

Nightshade

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Posts 13962
just out of reach

26 posted 2004-09-09 01:42 PM

Many, many thanks and hugs!!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

27 posted 2004-09-10 03:50 PM

Chris!

This is amazing!
I adore it!

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