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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2004-09-07 01:43 PM

As the last drop of rain
began its winding journey
down the clearing canvas
of my window,
I pictured you...
somewhere
between light and darkness
somewhere
beneath a sunlit sky
somewhere
without pain,
before clouds rolled in
bringing drops of rain.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-09-07 01:44 PM

Robert! Welcome home!!!
I like these glassy images!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-09-07 01:49 PM

So dream-like and ethereal, yet vividly pictured in my mind. A lovely write.

EA

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2004-09-07 06:55 PM

this was a poem i'm going to read again and again.

snow

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-07 07:15 PM

Robert! So good to read you again!
And, this is SO beautiful!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2004-09-07 08:01 PM

Ah, memories.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-09-07 08:08 PM

enjoyed

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-09-07 09:26 PM

I feel the pain with this write. So sad, but well said.

......jo

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2004-09-07 09:45 PM

Partly Cloudy is a beautiful piece of art.
miscellanea

Margot
Member

since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

9 posted 2004-09-07 09:55 PM

Robert,

Heart touching, wonderful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

msflame
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 188

10 posted 2004-09-07 11:09 PM

Robert, love the rain, love this!!!

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

11 posted 2004-09-08 04:34 AM

Hmm, I wrote a poem titled Partly Cloudy as well.

Yours is way better though.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

12 posted 2004-09-08 04:54 AM

It is raining here through the windows of my heart do I see the rain falling...

~love and hugs
~ARH

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