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Before the Dawn
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Before the Dawn |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It's unconditional, the feelings I have, of those forgotten places where once I traveled the shadows of you. I can sit in the darkness and imagine. See you through eyes, a stranger, and still the moments, to wait until the evening hangs over and laces me in the mist of a late summer's eve. Its calm reaching and pulling me towards you. A hold swaying me with little effort and acquiring my heart with few words. Direction is yours for the taking, when you can reach inside with the naked truth and leave your mark planted, allowing room to grow. You are firmly fixed in my mind, shades of gray for me to brighten. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very, very nice M~ You have written your emotions into words just wonderfully. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Just beautiful words, filled with feeling, thank you for sharing this, enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned straight from your heart Maureen. Very much enjoyed the read... Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ 'still the moments, to wait until the evening hangs over and laces me in the mist of a late summer's eve' I feel *sighs* all over this lovely piece~ *Huglets* to you~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty write |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
The longing pours from your words.... well done.... E S West |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh, I like this. Very nice! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I loved every word, especially the beginning and the end. Your poetry is so pretty and does indeed, brighten these blues pages. Hugs Maureen~ |
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DarkDreamer Junior Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 19nowhere,special |
wow! that kicks my poetry's butt. hay, do you mind if i put that on my computer? kristen some people look down on me because i am a dreamer. some people look up to me, because i am so wise, yet im only 14. i just want people to look starig |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ummmmmmm, really nice, M-lady. *hugs*....jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There's something about unconditional that means so much. Lets take it to the top, one more time, just because.  |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This entire poem is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing it  and then He created the horse... |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Great, great poem. "...and still the moments, to wait until the evening hangs over and laces me in the mist of a late summer's eve." Love it. Beautiful lines. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
This poem oozes heartfelt emotions. Very well written. You made me feel your emotion through your words - a difficult thing to accomplish and a sign of a keeper of a poem. Your words touch me. I spend too much time away from home. Thank you for your contribution to my own introspection. Warm regards, Kevin |
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