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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-07 09:11 AM

morning
some dawn in a shawl
just enough dark there
to make shadows
where the sin gods worship

I hear the mouth dry music
anticipation is a glove
that is worn on one hand
while the other strums
through a forest of damp trees

what color sun today
will dance at the window
when lovers close their eyes
and let their skin mend
the seam of two to one

and night leaves her veil
on a bed post lance
like a lady's banner
for her knight to savor
when he captures her sighs

at time lapse gallop dawning

______________

Dark

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2004-09-07 09:22 AM

what color sun today
will dance at the window
when lovers close their eyes
and let their skin mend
the seam of two to one

~*~

perhaps for you the sun will blush warm.

Too too smooth you are...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-09-07 09:30 AM

love how you acknowledge your sensitivities...
exceptionally, insightfully, sensuously
well

K

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-09-07 11:38 AM

perfect morning for some skin mend...

and this is where I found it.

Thank you..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-07 12:25 PM

sigh

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-09-07 12:30 PM

what color sun today
will dance at the window
when lovers close their eyes
and let their skin mend
the seam of two to one

of course, the entire poem was amazing, but this part was most soothing and enlightening, made me feel like I was somewhere else, where the sun was actually dancing at my window...

Beautifully done

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

6 posted 2004-09-07 01:38 PM

what color sun today
will dance at the window
when lovers close their eyes
and let their skin mend
the seam of two to one

Would be a suffusion of light, and dark,
night and day, twilight...of the most liquid sky.

seamless then..

Love,
me

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-09-07 02:35 PM

Oh, I like this one very much- a Knight and his Lady and the capturing of sighs- you do write the sensual well, my shadowy friend

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-09-07 02:54 PM

and night leaves her veil
on a bed post lance
like a lady's banner
for her knight to savor
when he captures her sighs

oh dark master of sensual...

SIGH......*grinz*

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

9 posted 2004-09-07 04:46 PM

Excellent!
Keen insight!
You get so much, out of so few words....

E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-09-07 05:30 PM

This is gorgeous...absolutely.

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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