Open Poetry #33 |
Heavenly dance |
Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Heavenly dance Tomorrow's endless skies of blue Dance with the stars tonight Held forever in a kiss Sweet magic of delight Our wings are made of gossamer Into the night we soar Our finger play the melody The song that I adore A breath in awe you captured And I will ne'er be free For in this dance of heaven I have found the heart of me Margot Hill 07Sept Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written and expressed soft and magical |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
LeeJ & Susan Thank you very much Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done... The tune of this is delightful. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Margot, what a lovely and romantic poem this is! Much enjoyed. |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
TD & iliana Thank you very much Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
delightful piece |
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