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Margot
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0 posted 2004-09-07 06:15 AM



Heavenly dance

Tomorrow's endless skies of blue
Dance with the stars tonight
Held forever in a kiss
Sweet magic of delight

Our wings are made of gossamer
Into the night we soar
Our finger play the melody
The song that I adore

A breath in awe you captured
And I will ne'er be free
For in this dance of heaven
I have found the heart of me

Margot Hill
07Sept

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2004 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-09-07 03:01 PM


beautifully written and expressed
soft and magical

Susan
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2 posted 2004-09-07 03:04 PM


Very nice-

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Margot
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3 posted 2004-09-07 03:58 PM


LeeJ & Susan

Thank you very much

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-09-07 08:47 PM


Well done...
The tune of this is delightful.
TD

iliana
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5 posted 2004-09-07 08:48 PM


Margot, what a lovely and romantic poem this is!  Much enjoyed.  
Margot
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6 posted 2004-09-07 09:13 PM


TD & iliana

Thank you very much

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

ecrivan
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7 posted 2004-09-08 12:50 PM


delightful piece


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