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Dazzle Me
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Dazzle Me |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
The moon spills pennies at midnight between raindrops that fall on copper studded streets. You hold out your arms to me, currents fly from underneath our feet and journeys are swept into existence. We, you and I, stop loathing our mistakes Be my love again, there’s a road not far that leads to warmth there’s pain, yes, its visual, yes, healing seems to be held by a straight-laced tutor who closes the books on us, but we are not finished, together, we keep moving until we find the road. Be my love, again. On this day, along those streets, and dazzle me once more. (For Andreas) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Something says to me that he will be pleased, perhaps you both will. The conviction certainly flows from your writings..best of luck! |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Magnus, thank you! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The moon spills pennies at midnight between raindrops that fall on copper studded streets Awesome entrance to your poem. Much enjoyed. Chris  "At one glance |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Chris, James, thanks, this is kinda a variation on pennies from heaven. |
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