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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-09-06 11:41 PM




Delicate lays fresh cut grass
Scents of harvest now mown smooth
Predicate to verbs a season stunning
Come hither drums
Vibration through the limbs
A promise to sap low in the belly
Swathed in morning always crisp
Stirring, in the gypsy blood of fall
And what could be prayed, is knelt
Given up a worthy gift, left lacquered
As colors worn are fondled in golden fingers
Untied, and left upon the soft of surrender
In glide of lips accentuated of rising stars
Left dangling in the glistened veils of trees
Stood tall and proud this rugged trail
In silence slips the stream to wet a thirsty dream
And all that is worth everything
Completes in bounty scene

Copyright Kkh 9/6/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-09-07 03:25 AM


very pretty
Honeybunch
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2 posted 2004-09-07 03:43 AM


In silence slips the stream to wet a thirsty dream
And all that is worth everything
Completes in bounty scene

Lovely!

MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-09-07 04:26 AM


yes lovely


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4 posted 2004-09-07 08:05 PM


makes me think of the beauty of the seasons
as they slowly change...and the thanksgiving
of dinner on that day in November...lovely
images K.

ShiningWindHaze
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5 posted 2004-09-08 01:59 AM


This style reminds me of my own. I do the same thing. It flowed awesomely. I like the whole poem but this part especially:

"As colors worn are fondled in golden fingers
Untied, and left upon the soft of surrender
In glide of lips accentuated of rising stars
Left dangling in the glistened veils of trees"

- Haze

iliana
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6 posted 2004-09-08 02:29 AM


"Stirring, in the gypsy blood of fall"

And, yet leaving its full bounty.....beautiful poem, TD.  Loved the title, as well.   ......jo

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