Open Poetry #33 |
Over a Mountain |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Over a mountain far, far, away energy waits in the shadows of life in a tent perhaps or under a tree encircled by ropes protecting the free against the slithering slide of mambas and cobras and little grass snakes. A fire to the side glows peacefully content to remain settled and calm in the face of the night’s mysterious dark. The moon overhead grins happily for the scene down below reminiscent of past brings a glow to her cheeks as she passes on by to the other side. The breath of air even and slow rises and dips in tune with time and the clouds gently roll and touch tenderly each star in the sky in approval of stability. And the sun rises up like Christmas tree lights bedazzling the eyes of pure energy called now to move and don a disguise. When I awake no memory stirs and tents and trees perhaps a dream forgotten in the land of real. But not to fade temporarily from this reality and release unadulterated energy brings the mambas, cobras, in and how they slither, slide, and glide, and swallow whole the essence, soul! |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
a very good read, brings many thoughts to my mind, or are they dreams? ... E S West "always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.." |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks for the read, Eric. Sometimes dreams are real and sometimes reality's a dream - go figure. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
real or dream the landscape is the same beautiful and waiting |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks James, Dixie, and ~K~, for the read - much appreciated. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The breath of air even and slow rises and dips in tune with time and the clouds gently roll and touch tenderly each star in the sky in approval of stability. Just what I needed to read, and right where I needed to be tonight. Thanking you~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Frightening, in a way, this, but I get your point....and there is a profound truth here. ....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Bluesy, I'm glad it helped and thank you for the read. Hi, Jo - frightening? I think it's essential to let go of this reality by sleeping - I just wish I could know what happens when we do but I do know that it's not frightening. |
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