Open Poetry #33 |
That's All |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thats All If you want to be my butterfly fly a little closer and stay a lot longer so I can admire your beauty. If not, just fly away and let some other guy admire your butterfly day. That's all I have to say. JamesLee August16 2004 I know you will anyway. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and to the point...well said very heartfelt |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Is it? If that's all that's everything & if that's everything everyone is going to be disappointed All our voices joined & this was all we could come up with |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
liked this, kinda sad though |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Well written Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
Like this...to the point.... E S West "always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.." |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very nice. I hope your butterfly stayed! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
liked this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for the nice response...yes my butterfly is still around...but she's free to go if she desires...who am I to try to hold a butterfly...James |
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