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Open Poetry #33

Autumnal Fall

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-09-04 12:00 PM

Autumnal Fall

I watched a leaf today
it was trying to run away
but had to stop to rest
found it too great a task

escaping time and its wind

©September 4, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-09-04 01:26 PM

I could see this scene...nice imagery here
and good message

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-09-04 02:05 PM

I love the dance of leaves....beautiful image

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-09-04 03:26 PM

Awesome! I like the way you think!

....jo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-09-04 09:43 PM

So good to read you in these uplifting and fanciful writes. A delight.
TD

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