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E S West
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since 2004-08-31
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0 posted 2004-09-03 07:09 PM



Oh how love fills your heart and soul with glee.
Flowing on endless, without boundary.
Until that which you loved, turns upon you,
Forever filling you, with pain undue!

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

© Copyright 2004 Eric Shawn West - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-09-03 07:18 PM


Very profound thoughts here Eric.
Much enjoy reading you.
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-09-03 07:56 PM


pretty sad words, Eric

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-09-04 05:10 PM


You've got to watch out
for those sharp turns.
A lot said, eloquently.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2004-09-04 06:26 PM


How very, very true!  Good write! .......jo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2004-09-04 08:12 PM


Yes...sometimes they were not what or who we expected...and the truth can hurt...James
Kristabell
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6 posted 2004-09-04 08:56 PM


Very well expressed. I know how that feels.

I still do not know why he turned on me. I never found out the reason.

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