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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-07-09 10:48 AM

"creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep"
I said it
low and long
lingering
upon the "e's"
experimental
on the tongue
he heard me
so his yelling
ceased
scratch of head
a-querying:
"What did you
just say to me?"
"creeeeeeeep"
I started giggling
creep-creep-creep
now like a frog
"CAAARRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEP!"
I croaked
through my guffaw
tears of laughter
glistening
rolling down
my apple cheeks
until I thought I'd die.

He stood there silent and confused,
not quite sure of what to do--
I had gone and broke the rules--
so he simply left the room.

I smiled and whispered:
"creep" again
wriggling my toes
relieved
"score one more for me"
(you creep!)
laughing louder
when he screamed
at the bedroom ceiling then:
"I toldja she was nuts!"

oh yeah?

"FREAKING Creep." I said

He slammed the door.

I guess I win.

* * *

Sometimes the best offense--
is a mad pretense.

Sunshine

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1 posted 2004-07-09 10:58 AM

Sometimes the best offense--
is a mad pretense.

~*~

May I borrow you?

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-07-09 11:00 AM

Sometimes the best offense--
is a mad pretense.

Yeppers, it sure is Serenity...

Loved this.

Nightshade

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just out of reach

3 posted 2004-07-09 11:03 AM

You got that right!

Hugs, Chrislane

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-07-09 11:13 AM

serenity

Susan
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5 posted 2004-07-09 11:28 AM

Oh yes, this was great. It is best, the use of the unexpected, most effective.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

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6 posted 2004-07-09 11:45 AM

serenity

This touches on such truth of human interaction....a scene right out of the neighborhoods and homes of many. The power of one word is pretty amazing...and...I applaud you for your courage!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-07-09 12:33 PM

ROTFL!
I can just picture this scene!!!
You are too much!!
Love ya lady~

devinechild22
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8 posted 2004-07-09 12:36 PM

That was great. It brought a smile to my face. What a funny scene you have painted here.
*Allison*

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2004-07-09 01:28 PM

Have you considered writing screenplays!

The images, dialogue, emotions projected... would literally leap out of the screen and into the solar plexus of each member of the enrapt audience! You write right real!

EA

kaile

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singapore

10 posted 2004-07-09 02:31 PM

hilarious! go pack some more punches

serenity blaze
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11 posted 2004-07-09 03:35 PM

This is the PG version.

*snort*

I've been known to say many things in the heat of the moment, but actually, it's the milder cussing that confuses him.

It took him DAYS to figure out, "nanny-nanny-poo-poo!"

Thanks for sharing my warped humor today.

And EarthAngel/Linda, you get a hug for the screenplay bit. I'm working on working on it.

PKreturns
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12 posted 2004-07-09 04:31 PM

I know this game well. What was the final score Karen?

Sunshine

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13 posted 2004-07-09 04:33 PM

It took him DAYS to figure out, "nanny-nanny-poo-poo!"

~*~

If'n and when he claims to be hard of hearing? Mumble...

serenity blaze
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14 posted 2004-07-09 05:37 PM

grin. The game is on. Today at the doc's office I was sitting there with him and the nurse called out:

"Mrs. Blaise?"

"For now." I answered pointedly.

and btw, it occurred to me that I might give credit for the title--

"score one more for me" is a line from a John Meyer song--entitled

"My Stupid Mouth".

iliana
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15 posted 2004-07-10 12:20 PM

Karen, I loved it. Nobody can say you are not you! Loved it loved it loved it!

...jo

Mysteria

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16 posted 2004-07-10 12:45 PM

Why is it I don't think the word you used was creep? Now keep that up and get them to watch t.v. somewhere else too. Way to go serene one.

Imagination is more important than knowledge...
Albert Einstein

Paula Finn
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17 posted 2004-07-21 09:34 AM

LOL mines a jerk...he doesnt handle that one well at all...

Susan Caldwell
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18 posted 2004-07-21 11:03 AM

"freak" is the name I use most often...

lol

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JL
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19 posted 2004-07-21 12:00 PM

Yep! You did.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

passing shadows
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displaced

20 posted 2004-07-21 12:36 PM

you're a trip

serenity blaze
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21 posted 2004-07-21 06:16 PM

Dixie? My life is a trip...and laughing, I could write an entire book of the most amusing arguments--just had another today in fact.

*shaking my head*

Sometimes you just gotta say "What da ?..."

thanks again, all

Dr.Moose1
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22 posted 2004-07-22 08:15 PM

serenity,
Would it be a bad pun if I said I found your story quite "riveting" (especially the frog part?). Now that I see that in print, I guess I've answered my own question.
Be well,
Doc

serenity blaze
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23 posted 2004-07-22 09:17 PM

always, doc, you have the best Rx.

GG
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Lost in thought

24 posted 2004-07-22 09:32 PM

lol I can picture this... all too well!

Oh and you say up there that you can write a book about of the most amusing arguments?

get to it then.

...faster!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Midnitesun

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Gaia

25 posted 2004-07-22 10:02 PM

LOL, it has a funny chirpy/creaky sound to it, yanno.

CAREEEP CAREEEP CAREEEP CAREEEP CAREEEP

That's all the more critiquin I can give ya, lady.

CocoBaci
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26 posted 2004-10-11 02:15 AM

Smiles at Serenity
Couldn't resist to bump this to forward pages...
*~coco~*

littlewing
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27 posted 2004-10-11 04:38 PM

OMG you ARE nuts!

(like the rest of us)

*grinning*

You are awesome Karen.
This really made me laugh, much needed.

serenity blaze
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28 posted 2004-10-12 09:28 PM

with a grinning *wink* to three favorite ladies, I thank you---

sounds like ya'll have been there.

thanks for reading

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