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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-12 08:17 AM


I brought my toys
to your gun fight
you wore neon stockings
and a whip with happy face tails

we played cowboys and martians
in the wading pool
and sipped caramel
from the candy apple machine

you said size didn't matter
when I bought you a lollie-pop
but you lied and licked mine too
when I was looking for heaven

we hid in the shears there
by your window kingdom
and the tiptoe birds whispered
with rubber bands on their beaks

you were a candy coated wonder woman
with velcro on your thigh boots
my mind was just a jeweled pony
named mush with brown sugar

but you called me ranger lumbus
____________

Dark

scribble note...no way!! take a prozac and a viagra, close your eyes tight, chug a pint of jack and it will be clear as mud in the morning...

© Copyright 2004 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
1 posted 2004-10-12 08:24 AM


LOL...playful and crazy...

stay that way...lol

much love,
**babygirL**

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-10-12 09:08 AM


hehehe, still love your scribble notes

Good good morning
Wishin you a lovely day by the sea...throw a rock in the water, and make a wish for me...if you would be so kind?

Good day to you

Velcro on her thigh boots...sheeeshhh!!!
hehe

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-10-12 09:51 AM


I love your playful side and the smiles you give me in the morning - my addiction only intensifies

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-10-12 09:59 AM


we hid in the shears there
by your window kingdom
and the tiptoe birds whispered
with rubber bands on their beaks

~*~

You play your shadows well...

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
5 posted 2004-10-12 10:43 AM


Thank God!!...there is someone out there as weird as me...loved the write....and you ain't right....right on....!!!and..write on....and pass that pint this way
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2004-10-12 10:51 AM


LOL, left me thinking about smiley faced lollipops.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2004-10-12 11:18 AM


Thanks you guys...
was a fun park experience
that i rewind twice each moment
to imagine slow motion again

you are all too kind
to this strange ranger


Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
8 posted 2004-10-12 04:06 PM


LMAO

Great stuff here..

as always when you put on the show.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
9 posted 2004-10-12 04:47 PM


DS...there used to be a Pawn Shop down in Gulfport Ms. that used to advertise on TV all the time...he would dress up like the Lone Ranger...hat and mask etc....Used to call himself the "Loan-Arranger".....
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
10 posted 2004-10-12 09:25 PM


Just had to come back for a smile, chuckle and fix -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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California
11 posted 2004-10-12 09:58 PM


DS .....Hi!  I'm always reading you, although I may not always reply, I do enjoy.


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