Open Poetry #33 |
Chance Meeting |
Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Chance Meeting By Paul Wilson Shall we dance this dance among the stars and moon Might we temp fate as angels play lovers tune A glance of eyes in chance of blush Gentle heartbeats change to rush A meeting of chance fate gifted to us Tender hearts learning how too trust The night is young or so it seems A million dances shared a lifetime of endless dreams The moon quietly hides it’s face in tender weep Angels sing their lullaby as you fall asleep Moments shared in time between you and I Lifetime spent together now we say goodbye ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-02-2004 06:46 AM).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How heartfelt this piece of poetry...so nice to see your name amoung the blue pages |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
hoot_owl_rn... Thanks so much for the read and reply. I don't get much free time these days to visit these pages of blue, but always will visis when I can...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Paul, I really like this. You have a tender heart and a warm way with words. Well done... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love to have a dance with you Paul.. This is so sweetly melancholy. Very nicely penned. Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Larry...Thanks for your tender words. Very much appreciated...Paul Nancy...Perhaps one day we shall dance. Thank you so much for being a bright star in the night for me.Thanks for the read.I read where people were telling you welcome back, so welcome back dear lady from where ever you've been...Paul passing shadows... No reason too be sad, just some fictional ramblings from an old softy. Thanks for taking time to read & reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This long quiet love....everyone should be so blessed. This poem makes me happy, just reading it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This carries the beauty of two who knew what it was to "be together" and I'm with passing shadows it is always sad to see such love end- even if it is only a pause in the breath of existence - and even if it is only fictional- simply lovely Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Paul this was as precious as the stars that light the sky , love such as this remains in the heart long after goodbye Hope |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ed...Thanks for your thoughtful words. I feel I am blessed too have shared my life with one person...Paul Susan...The end of our relationship will be very sad and hard too take. I can only hope that all of our memories will get us through it. Thanks for your touching reply...Paul HopeS...You are so right, our memories shared will always be precious too us. Thanks for taking time too read and for your sweet reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was really beautiful |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
Unless you have two left feet like me (smile) always avoided the dancefloor. I like the progression of the poem, very nice. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Than you for sharing your heart, it is beautiful! ~Love and Jugs ~ARh Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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