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Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-09-07 12:22 PM

You Know Me

You feel me
well beyond the wall
of a weathered soul.

You touch me
in ways beyond words
or comprehension.

You hear me
far beyond the summit
of my silent cry.

You see me
beyond the horizon
still reaching out to you.

You shall know me
beyond mortality
still loving you
...everlasting.

you will feel my gentle touch
in the depth of the lonely night.

you will feel me with you
when you walk the path alone.

you will hear me sing to you
the lullaby of these poems past.

you will see me next to you
when you are afraid of being alone.

I am there with you, always.
At my heart's core,
I am there for you.

My love shall not wither
with our youth.

It is sustained
...for all time.

Even in darkness
You know who I am.

I am the man you married
beyond the wall
of this weathered soul.

Coypright, Kevin V. Reese, 2004

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-09-07 12:28 PM

Hello Kevin. BRAVO! I love this. You write so eloquently to her. The depth of the love you hold in your heart is abundantly apparent. You have offered up here a true testament that even Shakespeare himself would weep to read. I LOVE THIS! (Huge applause!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-09-07 12:28 PM

Whoa! This was so beautiful. Your wife must feel so honored with such a great love.

...jo

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2004-09-07 01:37 AM

Kevin,
I know that experience too well. Very well done for a lovely lady, I'm sure.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-07 02:39 AM

wonderful write! lucky lady she is

Margot
Member

since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

5 posted 2004-09-07 04:56 AM

Excellent

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-09-07 11:34 AM

She is one very fortunate,
and blessed, woman.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-09-07 11:48 AM

Beyond beautiful Kevin.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-09-07 12:37 PM

How open and beautifully you write of your love for your lady.
This is one she will treasure forever...
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-09-07 03:13 PM

Sigh, so lovely. I bet she certainally appreciates a heart such as yours, Kevin.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

10 posted 2004-09-07 08:04 PM

Hey Kevo. This was a very admirable write. In the sense that I wish I had a wife to share emotions deep beyond compare. A legendary love, which I can see yours is such.

- Haze

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

11 posted 2004-09-07 08:12 PM

Very extravagant! I am glad for you both!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2004-09-07 08:17 PM

very nice

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2004-09-07 10:20 PM

wow....

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

14 posted 2004-09-07 10:38 PM

Kevin,

   It doesn't get much better!  What a lovely message to your wife.  Your undying committment, love, and devotion is a pleasure to read!
                 miscellanea

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

15 posted 2004-09-07 10:39 PM

Kevin...
this is so completely romantic...

msflame
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 188

16 posted 2004-09-07 11:22 PM

This is a very exciting poem. The words are alive. I enjoyed this so much.

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

17 posted 2004-09-08 04:22 AM

Thank you so much for your warm replies. I am a lucky one. There is no doubt. I can't tell you, in words that come easily, how much I appreciate the type of forum this has proven to be. It is full of warm, friendly, inviting, gifted poets that share the passion of writing as much as I do. Your support is such an inspiration to me to continue my growth in my writing. Thank you for the gift of your kind words.

Your poetic friend,

Kevin

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