Open Poetry #33 |
A seed of courage |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
There are passions deep inside us all that only hope might free There are dreams that seem impossible, but others that could be A friend within who’d like to try another road and way A maze of tangled wishes that are lost to everyday Life is much too complex than to say what might amend With years of built commitments and the years so hard to mend We’re child like to surroundings that just make us feel at home How coward us, the victim who accepts their time alone Everything is nothing when peace can’t find the soul As searching dreams and miracles won’t make what’s missing whole The thought that time will reckon and payback all what’s been lost Just keeps us waiting longer to sustain a greater cost There are wise men, there are healers, there’s religion we can try But truth in wanting better is the cure to the lie And only we alone can change what eats away within Let’s plant a seed of courage to then help a life begin |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I couldnt pick just one favorite verse. Rick, I love reading your words, always... always I see so much hope written in them. Thank you! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, my dear friend, thank you so much for this great reply, your time and comments are all so much appreciated. Be well and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are wise Rick very wise good to read you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow, such wise words and counsel- something I take to heart- well said. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
What's that saying, my friend, about having faith the size of a mustard seed? Same could go for hope. It doesn't take much... it just takes having. Well done. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Rick...Thoughtful write. There is so much we can do too make things better for all if only we take that first step...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Dixie, nice to see you visit here, thanks for the reply my friend, as always very much appreciated. Take care. Dear Susan, thank you for your reply, great you could visit and share some time. Decaflame, thank you for your words, we must all have some hope to cope, great to see you here, take care my friend. Good to see you Paul, thank you for your reply, much appreciated, the first step can be a dosey. To you all my friends, again thank you for your replies, they are all appreciated and heart felt. Sincerely Rick |
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