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Rick
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0 posted 2004-09-03 07:20 AM



There are passions deep inside us all that only hope might free
There are dreams that seem impossible, but others that could be
A friend within who’d like to try another road and way
A maze of tangled wishes that are lost to everyday

Life is much too complex than to say what might amend
With years of built commitments and the years so hard to mend
We’re child like to surroundings that just make us feel at home
How coward us, the victim who accepts their time alone

Everything is nothing when peace can’t find the soul
As searching dreams and miracles won’t make what’s missing whole
The thought that time will reckon and payback all what’s been lost
Just keeps us waiting longer to sustain a greater cost

There are wise men, there are healers, there’s religion we can try
But truth in wanting better is the cure to the lie
And only we alone can change what eats away within
Let’s plant a seed of courage to then help a life begin  

© Copyright 2004 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-09-03 08:04 AM


I couldnt pick just one favorite verse. Rick, I love reading your words, always...
always I see so much hope written in them.
Thank you!

Rick
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2 posted 2004-09-03 09:50 AM


Gentle Spirit, my dear friend, thank you so much for this great reply, your time and comments are all so much appreciated. Be well and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-03 12:08 PM


you are wise Rick
very wise

good to read you

Susan
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4 posted 2004-09-03 12:11 PM


Wow, such wise words and counsel- something I take to heart-  well said.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Decaflame
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5 posted 2004-09-03 03:49 PM


What's that saying, my friend,
about having faith the size
of a mustard seed?

Same could go for hope.

It doesn't take much...
it just takes having.

Well done.

Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2004-09-04 10:56 AM


Rick...Thoughtful write. There is so much we can do too make things better for all if only we take that first step...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Rick
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7 posted 2004-09-05 07:24 AM


Hi Dixie, nice to see you visit here, thanks for the reply my friend, as always
very much appreciated. Take care.

Dear Susan, thank you for your reply, great you could visit and share some time.

Decaflame, thank you for your words, we must all have some hope to cope, great to see you here, take care my friend.

Good to see you Paul, thank you for your reply, much appreciated, the first step can be a dosey.

To you all my friends, again thank you for your replies, they are all appreciated and heart felt.

Sincerely
Rick

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