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Open Poetry #33

Such Is Beauty

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-09-03 08:54 PM

Behold thy beauty whom lies in solace wait,
'neath these skies of summer's date.
Oh how thy love draws thee nearer-
to such beauty, earthly treasures, are so mere!

So great is thy beauty- the rose lives in shame,
for such is love, this passion inflamed.
Two passions in love, death cannot touch,
for such is beauty, and loves too much!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-09-03 09:39 PM

Jared,
This pieces lives up to your PassionalyRomantic name!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-09-04 12:14 PM

Enjoyed...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-04 11:28 AM

Yeppers -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-04 01:24 PM

beautiful!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2004-09-05 07:26 AM

Beautiful words, all heart felt and enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

6 posted 2004-09-05 07:45 AM

“Two passions in love, death cannot touch,”

I like this line, and the rest of the poem,
Yes death cannot touch, but it does take the touch out of love.

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