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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2004-09-03 04:02 AM



Hello Sir,

You are the Lord they say
who can produce a miracle,
each and every day
I am just a woman,
producing nothing but love
for friends I've met
in rhyming words
through the internet
But some of them I came to know
real close as you might say
My question is, if you're the Lord
could you produce a miracle
perhaps, dear Sir...today?
They are your greatest fans you see
but they are in distress
They need your help
and maybe more
'Cause Francis will create a mess
Francis is a lady too
at least, that's what they say
and she is hitting hard on friends
later on this very day
So here I am, I'm begging you
keep them safe and sound
If you're as good as they all say
then keep them to the ground
Because dear Sir, my greatest wish
is to see them all once more
To feel their arms in tender hugs
to watch them laugh out loud
To hear their words in beautiful rhyme
You are the Lord they're saying proud
who can produce a miracle
Get on with it, dear Sir, it's time!


For all my friends and special ones, down in Florida. My heart will be with you.


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (09-04-2004 07:30 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-09-03 08:11 AM


Amen Titia, and your prayers I am sure will be joined with many others. Very well done!
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-09-03 08:20 AM


TitiaLove~
I read your heart in this~

My friend, knowing you and loving you as I do ... I feel the warmth of your thoughts encircle us all~

This is love ... about as earnest as it gets~
From the heart of my little bottom ...
I thank you dearest friend~

We're going to ride it out and will be in touch as soon after it passes as we can~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge, Bill and the whole family*~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-09-03 09:11 PM


Titia, dear dutchie, your words must carry some real weight!!! Frances is losing some of her power and it's more likely we'll get some strong winds and a lot of water as opposed to devastating storms.

Keep talking to Him. He listens to you!!!!!

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-09-03 09:26 PM


Amen Titia...Amen.
Larry C
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5 posted 2004-09-03 10:05 PM


Yes mam, I'll second that!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2004-09-03 10:44 PM


me three
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-09-04 12:41 PM


Nice writing....hoping for good news...James
Betty
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8 posted 2004-09-04 09:32 AM


This is so beautiful & heart felt.  
Betty

miscellanea
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9 posted 2004-09-04 09:49 AM


Titia,
  and He is. Enjoyed this a bunch and know that He does do the miracle thing. The trick is to see the miracle "when" it happens. Glad you sent this up.  Thanks,Titia.
          miscellanea  

Bonnie j
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10 posted 2004-09-04 10:05 AM


A beautiful, warm written prayer you have here. He is listening to all that call His name. Many times the answer is No, but still He listens.I'm sure many miracles will happen in the next few hours....If only mankind can see it when it happens and realize what just happened.
God Bless to all who is in the path of
Frances.
Sending out a chain of love and prayers from Ohio
Love Bunches
BonBon

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11 posted 2004-09-04 10:48 AM


Titia darling heart this is like you pure love, and I thank you for your prayers.

beautiful writing and beautiful intercession

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
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12 posted 2004-09-04 10:49 AM


Titia  
Amen and thank you dear,

PatAngel
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13 posted 2004-09-04 11:06 AM


Dear Titia,

This is one of the most heart-felt touching poems I have read in a long time. What a special soul you have! I know that God will answer your prayers. How could He not, when it comes from a beautiful place in your heart.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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14 posted 2004-09-04 12:35 PM


Unselfish and loving words like yours are music to God's ears. He hears.  Love, Joyce
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15 posted 2004-09-04 01:21 PM


thank you for this Titia
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16 posted 2004-09-04 04:08 PM


Titia:

Surely God must have heard your lovely words, plus all the prayers being said for the people of Florida.  

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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17 posted 2004-09-04 05:25 PM


Titia...A tender prayer from a tender heart.
May God bless you dear lady...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

iliana
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18 posted 2004-09-04 05:51 PM


Titia, this was such a thoughtful prayer.  I join you in it!   .........jo
SmartChick
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19 posted 2004-09-04 09:04 PM


Awwww Titia, this is a beautiful prayer or our dear friends in Florida. Amen to this! You have a heart of gold, my dear friend.
DarkDreamer
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20 posted 2004-09-04 11:35 PM


i will pray for you tonight. beatiful poem, from beginning to end

some people look down on me because i am a dreamer. some people look up to me because i am an Old Soul. i want people to look straight at me for who i

Isobel
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21 posted 2004-09-05 07:00 AM


Dear Titia

A very heart felt poem and one that all of Florida will appreciate in this difficult time of their lives.

God Bless You!

Love Isobel


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