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Open Poetry #33

The Day of Reckoning

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-09-02 07:34 PM

So, we thought that it was infinite
Just as a wild dove floats high above
Let’s realize that it was dead when it began
I know, it’s a painful reckoning of eternal death
But that’s how we began, Love?
My personality brought you pains from above
And your infatuation smeared hate into my heart
Once I found that my life was devoted to fondness
I reckoned I needed to change and it deranged
Everything that I knew was lost to a misty grave
But I thought that it was most certainly predestined
I was wrong, how the rain washes away feelings
Like that time the toad told us to forget the air
This comedy that we live in is stopped
That is why we fly high and never reckon to die
But it’s getting a lot harder to describe!!

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-09-03 10:19 PM

Andrew,
That is some intense writing! It doesn't seem it is getting harder to describe. You said it very well. Peace, I hope all is well.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-09-04 07:22 PM

Nice flow...James

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