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Illusions' Dreams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Illusions’ Dreams Once there came this bright illusion a simple fallacy of my heart, I fell for its deep deception but its delusions tore me apart. Wonderment came with the chimera and strong belief in its fantasy; Awake would I from hallucination, away with these delusions from me. This damn poor bit of humbuggery this hocus pocus of my heart ne’ermore a falseness to see, from this mirage I shall depart. That figment of imagination, that trick of love’s liquid streams the errors seen in the machinations are only that, a lonesome dream. ~*~ ©KRJ 18 September, 1999 revised 31 August 2002 Repost, 1 September 2004 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I love your new picture, your such a pretty woman...inside and out very much enjoyed this write, sad, but perhaps sometimes true, depending on the nature of both...extremely vivid picture, works well with your words...lovely my friend |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey Mum.... HUGS. This is as beautiful as you are m'lady! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The sadness of a disillusioned heart pulls to all who hear the tale. Well done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'lonesome dream' is this the proverbial delusional dream? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful sadness |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love your new picture...some day I will get someone to take one of me..hard to do in a mirror..I always have one hand with a camera in it, which I have to delete  great poem/image and especially the last verse: That figment of imagination, that trick of love’s liquid streams the errors seen in the machinations are only that, a lonesome dream.  M |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
How well I now the meaning of your words, well done... E S West |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You know you had me with the title... right? *S* Beautiful work, my friend!!! *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great picture and great poem...I only hope to get to see that beautiful face in person someday  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
When I was a child, I was told that the milkweed seed carries a dream on the wind. I don't think I have thought about that for at least a half century. Thanks! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunshine, Must be a day for dreaming and a windsomeness of heart re-connected in the streaming of a poet's words, in part. Thanks for this, it echoes well. Doc |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It just feels so good to read you again.. and this..is beautiful, as is your new pic! Hugs YOU! ~ Summer can't be over... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Milkweed holds a deadly poison....one that stops the heart. Its gift to the world is the Monarch butterfly, that benefits from the exposure, and flys away in its own time, bringing a bit of beauty everywhere it goes. Very poetic pairing, the weed and the butterfly.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed Ed's reply as it added for me to the integrity of the work. Beautiful, Kari! |
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