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Open Poetry #33

I Raised The Window

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-09 03:42 AM

I Raised The Window

I looked outside as the rain
played chopsticks on my window
wanting to be divorced from the room
I got lost in the long lightening fingers
massaging this reminiscent tune
and somewhere in the background
percussion screamed for attention
but the tender notes played at my heart
southern air thick in this sweat of passion
with each note sizzling against the heat
so I raised the window and leaned in
for a kiss

"be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-07-09 05:46 AM

What a pretty picture you wrote.

a cleansing at that too.

and love your signature too. Yep....one of my faves...

"I could drink a case of you and still be on my feet..."

Most appropriate here, h.

and pssssssst...congrats Deputy!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-09 11:49 AM

I like the imagery of this, being kissed by the rain. Makes me remember a time when I loved a good rain storm.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-09-03 09:48 AM

Poking about for random jewels this morning.... and lookie what I found! If anything ever deserved a bump, it's this one, so.........

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-03 10:46 AM

So glad this got a bump!
It's a winner Helen...
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-03 12:11 PM

that's pretty..so pretty

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2004-09-03 11:49 PM

excellent imagery...glad I stopped back in for a quick peek...well worth the look...

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