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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-09-03 08:02 AM

If I Could Write My Heart

If I could write my heart
like the beauty of a
Rembrandt or perhaps
of a symphony of
the finest masters,
I would write a
pallet of colors
and an orchestra
of sounds for the
world to see and hear.

If I could write my heart
it might be of the breathtaking
beauty of a tide breaking
along the shorelines
under a moonlight sky,
or perhaps it would be
of a sunset against
a backdrop of mountains
rising as two lovers
gaze upon the stars
from below, together
for the first time.

If I could write my heart
per chance it would be
of gentle breezes
touching the face
of a loved one
so far away
as they listen to
the sounds of a
heart beating in the
distance.

If I could write my heart
of love that touches
my spirit and weaves
it's warmth into my soul.......
I would write~ of you.

{revised, 9-3-04}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-09-03 08:59 AM

Sweet lady you just did write your heart.
This is truly beautiful Donna..just like your soul.
~Smiles, Hugs & Love, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-09-03 09:02 AM

Your loving heart shines through in everything that you write Donna. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-03 01:17 PM

'tis most beautiful, Donna, as is your heart-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-09-03 02:22 PM

I remember...
and still smile
with warm approval
over this lovely.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2004-09-03 02:53 PM

you write your heart in each line! always a treat and delight to read you hugssss

sister luv you

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-03 03:52 PM

just precious

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

7 posted 2004-09-03 06:06 PM

written with a gentle heart rare...

E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2004-09-03 09:44 PM

Donna,
As usual, Nancy Lee is right! Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-09-04 12:06 PM

Nice writing...James

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2004-09-04 12:02 PM

Donna dear you write your heart time after time and yes you do shine

Hope

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