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E S West
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since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

0 posted 2004-08-31 07:06 PM

Late summer's sun pours down it's rays on all,
The warming touch prepares the coming fall.
The still green canvas soon will change it's hues,
To firey colors against sky's blues.

No artist's brush could ever match this feat,
With endless subtle shades, it paints complete.
As master artist of all, Nature reigns.
In glory and splendor, it entertains.

As it completes each masterpiece for view,
Then quickly prepares to begin anew.
Soon stripping fall of it's colorful face,
Then dusting all with powdery, white lace.

Before the veil of white begins to fade,
The rainbow pallette for spring has been made.
With colors untold, it begins it's scheme,
Endlessly creating, changing the theme.

E S West

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-08-31 07:07 PM

oh, I am so pleased to read something like this today!
welcome!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-08-31 07:09 PM

And it only costs you the time to go out
and watch her paint upon this giant canvas
of ours.

Nicely done, welcome to Passions, pleased
to see a new face...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-08-31 07:16 PM

smiling at the warmth and beauty of this....
WELCOME to Passions, I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-08-31 07:33 PM

It takes a good poet to acknowledge a master artist. You're going to be well-received! Welcome to Passions!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2004-08-31 07:41 PM

penned with time
to rhyme
and rhymed
in rime

smooth slice ES

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-08-31 07:48 PM

NIce....James

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-08-31 08:21 PM

So nice to read your words here, Eric...

I hope you will find this a pleasant place to park your words~~

*s
Maureen

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-08-31 08:32 PM

With words upon your pallette, you paint the beauty of God's work upon this canvas well --I look forward to reading more of writing.

Welcome.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

9 posted 2004-09-01 01:12 PM

To all of you here at this friendly warm place, I thank you each for such a warm reception and your wonderful words of praise for my attempts to pen a poem of worth.
I am very new to writing poetry, these first ones I post are my first attempts, and I have not many of them yet..but will keep trying...
My time to be here is limited, so please bear with me as to my responding and posting, I do wish to read as many as time will allow me and respond in kind..

A special thanks to Maureen, whom without her kindness and belief in me, I would not be here to enjoy you all...

Thank you all so very much once more...

Eric S. West

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-09-01 01:48 PM

Eric~
WELCOME to our little corner of the Internet~

A lovely read ... and I'm thanking our Maureen for bringing you in~
(Thanks gal !)

Enjoy your stay with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2004-09-01 01:53 PM

Much enjoyed your first post!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2004-09-01 01:58 PM

a tremendous read...keep on penning beauty's like this...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2004-09-01 10:21 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Your first post was a joy to read!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2004-09-02 04:17 AM

awesome!

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

15 posted 2004-09-02 02:07 PM

Welcome
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.
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bernie

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

16 posted 2004-09-02 02:15 PM

I like very much the way you handle rhyme....you paint it into the picture rather than sticking it on as a frame. That's where it belongs, natural and in the flow. I don't do rhyme very much, but I appreciate it when it's done right.

~~J

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

17 posted 2004-09-02 05:53 PM

Thank you all for your kind words and warm welcome............

E S West

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