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Lopsided Rorschach of In Out Thoughts
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Lopsided Rorschach of In Out Thoughts |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Lopsided Rorschach of In Out Thoughts With random veracity, storms draw me outside, my spirit wanting, desiring the electric zone to greet my eye and spear my soul. Come in others call, come in from the storm but these call louder to me, billows designing themselves lopsidedly, instigating, as they would, apparitions for my eye, for what I would see in them, as if pleased that I would see something.  If you would come with me which is a matter of unconditional trust to follow the light that I see, do not be afraid, for if and before I were to lose my way, I would gift to you Ariadne's thread that you would return to your world, to your place, whether I return with you, or not. As one can get lost in lopsided ways, so you will have this golden thread, and I will have your trust, so know that in some way I will return. You will see me in the shadows of your own in and out thoughts. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea "If you would come with me which is a matter of unconditional trust to follow the light that I see," I'm coming....wait for me!! I am so hungry for just this!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
gosh... you know how I love storms, but this brought tears to my eyes....making me think of my Aunt Sue...  thanks for this one.... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
"apparitions for my eye, for what I would see in them, as if pleased that I would see something." I loved this...not only was it beautifully written, the way you used the words made me think about them in a way that I, perhaps, wouldn't normally do. thank you for that, lovely write. ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
If you would come with me which is a matter of unconditional trust to follow the light that I see, do not be afraid, for if and before I were to lose my way, I would gift to you Ariadne's thread that you would return to your world, to your place, whether I return with you, or not. smiling at you* Have I told you lately how amazing your words are? Well...they ARE! *grinz* Well done Ma'am....very well done. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"If you would come with me which is a matter of unconditional trust to follow the light that I see, do not be afraid, for if and before I were to lose my way, I would gift to you Ariadne's thread that you would return to your world, to your place, whether I return with you, or not. As one can get lost in lopsided ways, so you will have this golden thread, and I will have your trust, so know that in some way I will return." Wondering if you realize how cool these lines/verses are Kari??? Well, I'm here to tell ya...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes, that indeed absolutely cool  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
cool write and photo Am I the only one who sees a dancing image in this photo? LOL, maybe I shouldn't explain further, except to say I see many recognizeable shapes in most storms clouds. Maybe the hidden artist inside me needs to paint one of these scenes. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm speechless |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
all i see, is pure poetry |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Wow Karilea Absolutely stunning...storms are beautiful in their own, are they not...thank you for writing and sharing this master piece |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
If you would come with me which is a matter of unconditional trust to follow the light that I see Yup I see pure poetry too, just beautiful sunshinygirl  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done ma'am.. nicely done indeed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Perhaps I should just absorb the poetry and not comment on what I see within the clouds. Yes, it is interesting how we each can see different things there within them. And when you allow the words to be absorbed slowly, such a dessert. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Another storm lover! They admonish me in similar fashion when I yearn to be a part of it. But the golden thread? I wouldn't have thought of that. Nice one. -glider- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lordy, lady, you're in twister country, so be careful! heh. I like the message in this, there's a bit of faith shining through. You won't find any rain in Cali, just heat and probably, unfortunately, fires. Corinne |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*loud applause* Amazing poem, Sunshine! I think, perhaps, you are an angel! love ya, jo |
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