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The space between us
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The space between us |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Caution throws well thought-out adventures Into design…like crowds of orcas shrieking Reds and gold, on the wings of ocean Cluttering sensations of sweet evenings And afternoon infusions of fat boats Which never shiver in starless nights I loosen my leather jacket and become The last day of my life Carrying all words uphill Trusting numerous headaches With minimal view, anything but dull Light through the umbrella tree leaves Depicts a mystic quantum fuel Flickering on and off Like the ivy I’d forgotten made Weather patterns & roman numerals Notice how radiant fullness derives from empty Like a transitional power in the right hand On a printed page of white flares Droplets of intricate colors wash away Forming again...warm nights that don’t shiver Falling together, we become the lights we live by Will you help me buy a vessel? Touching the clear small space between us? [This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-01-2004 12:43 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ at how your words are always so enlightening M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't even express how I am in awe at how you do it |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loosen my leather jacket and become The last day of my life Carrying all words uphill Trusting numerous headaches With minimal view, anything but dull This verse is so striking! *S* I enjoy your work! *S* |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
how well you use words, wonderful to read... E S West |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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