Open Poetry #33 |
Permanent Flowers |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Permanent flowers freshly blooming forever, scents, colors changeless; what would we not give for them? Yet if it were so, in time would we not come to value them no more than leaves? |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
James, Probably true, but up to debate. The idea of permanent flowers strikes a chord now and then! Lovely poem. Gotta go and put a support under that library shelf. It's becoming awfully heavy with your poetry and that of the many gifted poets here! miscellanea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful! *S* I wish I had the discipline to make my thoughts succinct... instead... mine just wander. *S* I think how much we value what we have depends on the person... some would look forward to each glimpse of such flowers and count their blessings as they inhaled the heady fragrances... carrying sweet memories to sustain them if they had to leave such beauty. Others would be butterflies... always seeking something new, uncaring whether that meant better or just different... oblivious to whether they left behind wilt or wonder. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
much to ponder, yes, and so very well expressed. I enjoyed your thoughts immensely. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a thought |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This one jumped out of me, in response to this bittersweet song of Suthern's..... /pip/Forum90/HTML/001966.html |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Jamie: I'm so honored. *S* I've come to understand that some feel differently... but as a poet, I can't think of a greater accolade than knowing that words from my pen provided inspiration for another poet. *S* This bouquet is valued tremendously. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this encourages all who read...lovely write |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
It is all, always, in one's perspective. Well done, Sir. |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
good insight...blooming good E S West |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
ah, but you see, i value leaves as much as i do blooms - their beauty upon the trees as the dappled sunlight shimmers in glow upon their form. i could easily be surrounded eternally by flowers as well - enjoyed this Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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