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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-08-31 05:40 AM


Until Then


Dressing up to dress me down
to a level of complete.
Time again to live in Fantasy,
a world where I can feel beautiful
and free to compliments
as I skirt the ground of gravel and dust
and field the same to others.

Can dance with the moon,
sing with the stars, hide beneath my smile
the misfortunes of the past
and belong to that land of make believe
where anything can happen and all does.
By-passing those yesterdays
I shall feast my pleasure
and live once more.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2004-08-31 05:54 AM


when you are done with the moon, can i have a dance too?

i thought maybe you could take a bus of us to fantasy places with you?

you shine on the inside, and its bursting to get out!

so go on an sing sing sing...the stars are waiting!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-08-31 07:59 AM


this is sheer poetry in sync!

Made me sooooo Happy to read this
Thank you for writing and sharing

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-08-31 09:08 AM


ahhh but 'tis time for the Renaissance Festival...and I will be turning into Lady Ollyne~~


M

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4 posted 2004-08-31 10:32 AM


I have always wanted to go to that fair!!  and you m'lady shall be the fairest of them all!  Hugs.
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5 posted 2004-08-31 12:30 PM


very nice M
E S West
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6 posted 2004-08-31 06:48 PM


Well I get to read and reply to your beautiful poems thanks to you...looking forward to reading many...

                         e s west

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7 posted 2004-08-31 06:53 PM


thank you
I needed to read this today

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