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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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drive my fingers will carry you forever they’ll remind me of this suffering this silent hate all buckled and rheumatic like a dump of rocks and your nonchalance makes me want to drive a knuckle through your temple my nails are split my hands like sandpaper and my throat is full on dark suggestions i hold hammers on my hips to juggle with in this life of yours i’m living in The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. ~Stevie Nicks~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ACK! I don't WANT to be on that side of this....  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sometimes, this look suits you   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know the feeling |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"and my throat is full on dark suggestions" that's the hardest part--for me--thinking the thoughts and voicing a different me that I don't like... no jokes this time, luscious. just know I love you much and understand. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sounds like someone was lucky to wake up after this... Hugs Darksis |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree "in this life of yours i’m living in" I feel the heat of this and it is as cold as ice! You have written this so well...I hope that in the writing you earned some peace. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
do whispers fill your pillow with bitter regret or does indifference cushion your fall into sleep look fairly upon your dreams for the past can be caustic and pain can pollute memories leaving only wastelands behind love possesses nothing if not the power to hurt and the years do little to diminish its strength hiding love behind malice will never mend a fracture and serves only to let us keep our open wounds hostage There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my fingers will carry you forever they’ll remind me of this suffering this silent hate all buckled and rheumatic like a dump of rocks =============================== whew...talk about a powerful emotive piece... girlie this reads with a serrated edge and kick in the chest impact... take no prisoners poetess Maree. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
and your nonchalance makes me want to drive a knuckle through your temple I know that frustration, the casual assumption that your wishes don't matter and your pain doesn't count...but I've never said it in such an excellent way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
now you speak with your shoes untied let me hold your wrists as you dance turn up the music thanks for sharing this |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh yeah, and I still miss your pic......! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my nails are split my hands like sandpaper and my throat is full on dark suggestions i hold hammers on my hips to juggle with in this life of yours i’m living in wheww, this one gave me chills won't go there anymore...but I still remember... Heavy Metal you've put on the page Good one |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
it's said that violence doesn't solve anything, but sometimes it can be quite festive. i, like martie, hope you found a little peace through writing. it's not that the future is near or far... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
simply... hugs... |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
I revel in your unique, incredibly crafted posts. This one is no different. I wish, however, that some would understand that love is not supposed to hurt. Your sentiments are communicated brilliantly as always. I'm in your corner. Fight the good fight! Kevin |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~sharp and piercing. incredibly carved out language m, wow. ~a. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree? angels cannot be bound and gagged, m'friend . . . may your choir flush the hollow of your throat, then the rest of us will feel the grounds shake in echo . . . Where is your beautiful picture? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and your nonchalance makes me want to drive a knuckle through your temple Such power in your words... this is simply excellent!! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Like grit in spoonfool of ambrosia. {{hugs}} |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Maree my dear friend, Even at times of weakness, your strength shines through...such impact these words pack |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Felt it before... but could never say it quite so well. I went white-knuckled just reading this! Remind me never to be on your bad side... Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Heavy metal? More like a nuclear blast in my opinion. Wow, you put the heat to this one Maree. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nodding I understand....hugsss dear.... I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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