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solitary confinement |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Palest pink punctuates the evening as lighter shades of gray hug the edges of whispering clouds that hold no threat and yet? Eyes filled with tears scan the barren horizon hoping to catch one last glimpse of your warmth. You were the heat, the cool, the in-between; a comfort zone wrapped ‘round me, a spiral of love. I still feel your presence within twilight’s layered lace. I miss the tender touch of fingertip’s embrace upon uplifted face. Palest pink punctuates the evening as lighter shades of gray hug the edges of whispering clouds that hold no threat, save solitary confinement. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
ZOOKS! This reminds that winter is coming, and my own solitary confinement... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cuffed and spanked this was quite the tour loved the skyscape feelings dug it ms sun |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
warm  hugs to you, and thanx, wranxds, blush me pink  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keeper! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice... very nice |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW Kacy! Just a huge WOW! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I miss the tender touch of fingertip’s embrace upon uplifted face. Palest pink punctuates the evening as lighter shades of gray hug the edges of whispering clouds that hold no threat, save solitary confinement. this is assertive positivity...very much enjoyed, grab it's hand and go for the gusto...very lovely write |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Lots of great colors and images on this salad, with a soupcon of loneliness for dressing. You describe the feelings after love has gone away so well. Well done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord . . . this is exactly how I feel Kacy . . . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking each of you Sue, then this write is yours (that muse just went to the wrong addy this time) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
aww you are so good to me Kacy . . . you know this? Thank you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you're welcome, sis (though I'd rather paint you in bright yellow sunshine) |
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