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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-25 02:16 PM

I was looking for the follow up to leaving a woman.

One I wrote and buried somewhere.

This isn't it but derived from it.

Oasis

Hood on a stick
I bury to avoid the crook I am
I dream of power
I dream of death
And redemption
From sins I don’t want to think about
From problems
I didn’t know I caused
Hiding beneath the sun
I feel content
With the night
Comes my power
My feeling of glory
My desires of achievement
I am taking life
One day at a time
To return
To begin
Again

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2004-09-25 11:52 PM

"Hiding beneath the sun
I feel content
With the night
Comes my power
My feeling of glory"

Excellent craft.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

2 posted 2004-09-26 05:43 AM

One day at a time...so true.

Robert Joseph

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-09-26 10:31 AM

"I feel content
With the night
Comes my power
My feeling of glory"

~ I can identify with such feelings.

"I am taking life
One day at a time
To return
To begin
Again"

~ It's off with the old and on with the new in life. Once the pain is out of the way, starting over can be quite exciting!

EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-09-26 11:45 AM

An Oasis to regroup for the continued journey- thank Heaven for the green spots in the long travels of desert sand.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-09-26 12:07 PM

icebox

Thank you very much

dave

Robert Joseph

Robert

Yes, sometimes it works.

Thanks

Dave

"I feel content
With the night
Comes my power
My feeling of glory"

I never thought of it as that, but yes it has an idea that is worth working out.
"I am taking life
One day at a time
To return
To begin
Again"

Hidden in the back of my mind was that you go back and feel betrayed because it wasn't the same as you left.

How many people destroy where the live in urban, move to rural because they can't stand the urban and then destroy the rural.

Dave

Susan

It was a stick in the sand with a canopy made from the head covering.

The Oasis was somewhere to feel safe, spare yourself and concentrate your thoughs.

I appreciate the feeling of life in nothing that exists despite everything, but in a way, it was your own space, and hopefully people have forgotten "body language".

Dave

Susan

Yes and we build our own highs and lows and when we can't build either, we have trouble because we feel we lack not the control freak mentality but the control over ourselves.

Dave

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