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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-07-08 11:54 PM


Looped the lock in of a dominant dream
Once begotten on the banks of just a simple stream
I have found you

More vividly than any unsurmised digress
Perhaps the delicates belong beneath the summers yellow dress
Just this much faith
Enough to keep a cup of spirit handy
Hopefully in the background of a rivers randy
Unplanned and unforeseen, even with the slate wiped clean
Just this much faith
That you would seize the reigns and strip the future from past pains
Undoubtedly I have no plan...unknown to me where rivers ran
Or how to catch the overspill, should the tide turn if it will
Just this much faith
That you will know the words that I have tried to show
And understand that depth is not a hardened hand
That surface cannot contraband complexities emotions land
You are the sky...the reasons why and all the purposes combined
The only worthy one that God has let me find
And strange as it may seem, not ever is there sin in dream
But sovereignty and might, a give and take of all that's right
I have found you
Clearly in my heart

Copyright Kkh 7/8/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2004-07-08 11:56 PM


This is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-09 12:03 PM


A web well woven, this spell of clarity.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-07-09 12:07 PM


TD

"And strange as it may seem, not ever is there sin in dream
But sovereignty and might, a give and take of all that's right"

So very true and beautifully you!

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-07-09 06:06 PM


"And strange as it may seem, not ever is there sin in dream"

I think that's called "grace" and it's evident that you've got it, lady.

love yer work

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-07-09 06:58 PM


"You are the sky...the reasons why and all the purposes combined
The only worthy one that God has let me find"

So beautiful Kathleen...so very beautiful!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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6 posted 2004-07-09 07:28 PM


breathtaking nonetheleast...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2004-07-12 08:34 PM


Silky...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
8 posted 2004-07-13 12:39 PM


Kathleen, have you been off visiting in Muse Heaven or something.......this is absolutely tops with me, as ones the last one I read of yours!   .....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-07-13 03:29 AM


I sit in awe sometimes at how you get the inspiration
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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10 posted 2004-07-13 06:21 AM


astounding to have what this describes...you are indeed blessed with that light, and as an artist as well...lovely write.
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
11 posted 2004-07-13 12:20 PM


Very warm feeling reading this.  Excellent write.

JL



Ericc
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12 posted 2004-07-13 03:52 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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