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Choral Scenes |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In the tree filtered light of a forest surround where the breezes soft whisper their natural song one can steal away to a paradise found to reveal its' delights as the seconds grow long. What unfolds is the fabric of time in this place in the golden lit scenes you've been offered to view. What you've stole is the key to unwind at a pace and behold all you see breathe new life into you. As the sights and the sounds grow perceptively clear an enlightenment visited squarely on you that there might come a time you can no longer hear or delight in such things, though we doubt this is true. Where a chorus of light and a forest of sound has concealed in plain sight times of peace to be found. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-11-2004 06:09 AM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I wish my three syllable rhythms flowed like this beauty. Nicely done. (PS..an edit in line 7?) Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
kayjay, Thanks for both the read and edit. I've always thought "stold" should be a word, but, then again, I guess the english language is enough of a mess without my input. Doc |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"What you've stole is the key to unwind at a pace and behold all you see breathe new life into you" wish I had written this |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Midnitesun, Thanks. The catharsis found in writing of such things allows me more time to be away from them. A paradox, as I would much rather be there. Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1 A lovely read, enjoyed. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, Thanks, just a little visit to the last time I sat on a log or a rock, completely lost in my favorite environs. Doc |
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