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Fancy and Full |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ What it is, I don't care to know caught off guard by the facts, set me back in blue. There is love in the air a whirlwind that serves as a subtle reminder. Like a prize, for those who are lucky enough to rise above it. Where clouds form all fancy and full, but they too shall pass through a jet stream. It's part of the process, a way of getting to where we want to go. Caught up in the moment fleeting across the skies holding fast to what it is, and has always been. ~*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Many times it feels like this, and you state it so very well...the clutching to the moment without a thought to the rest of time. Excellent write. Good to read you again Bluesy...very good. TD |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I got caught up in the moment. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Caught up in the moment fleeting across the skies holding fast to what it is, and has always been." This reminded me of a dream I used to have where I was flying, without a plane. Was a great feeling...  . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy, what a fantastic poem and real....oh, yes!  .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah....sigh |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Much enjoyed. I like the idea of being swept away.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very much, a surprised prize... Well done, bluesy... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Like a prize, for those who are lucky enough to rise above it. Where clouds form all fancy and full, but they too shall pass through a jet stream. It's part of the process, a way of getting to where we want to go. Yeppie Lori, and sometimes it sure seems to take way to long to get where we want to go....lol. This is very well thought out and crafted hon, good to read your words again, I've missed them. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lori, this was simply beautiful, uplifting and quit promising...wishing you the best in all things...no where else to go now but up! Smiles and hugs |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Like a prize, for those who are lucky enough to rise above it. Where clouds form all fancy and full, but they too shall pass through a jet stream. " *smile* ...and doesn't the moment of change just take your breath away! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Lori.  You know that I love this,since I love everthing you write. Hope all is well with you, sweet lady.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I know this whirlwind of being full of fancy and my feet never wanting to touch the ground! You captured that perfectly! Fly high, fly free, fly often!  Big hug, Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bluesy, this paints a more positive picture. Like the way you have stroked the scene so well. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bluesy, I enjoyed this high-flying write. Laughing at Dunc's dream...wondering if he was wearing wings? |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
I know someone who needs to "rise above it" and just be swept away! I shall send them here to read your poem! Well done! Kelly You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving |
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