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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Self Sitting here shaded in the darkness just before sunrise, a slight glow greeting me through the eastern window. Feeling the tightness in wrists from the overdoing, yet knowing there is more to accomplish in so short a time. Bathing in thoughts of what could be someday, while softly massaging the moisture into my skin to warm the under and soothe the above. Smiling as I think about the touch that unexpected words can bring. How they can make or brake a mood, bring about images and sensations too often forgot. How the turn of a word can play down a hurt, caress the pain and cast a new light on the rise of a day. Even if by design, being caught on those webs fabrics me in lace, edged in thrill to capture the breathless feel that can be had so easily through a filigree, implied. Easily pleased though a distance away, waiting always for the one day when the blush of a cheek can be felt by one and seen by another and the full moon will light the night knowing the morn will be greeted once again with a smile. M *inspired~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-28-2004 09:41 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and the full moon will light the night knowing the morn will be greeted once again with a smile. *smiling at you* beautiful inspire, good to see your smile this morning M~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
can be felt by one and seen by another and the full moon will light the night knowing the morn will be greeted once again with a smile. Ohhhhh, how lovely and so pleasant your face is today...these words were especially smooth sailing, like the smell of salt air You have a special gift today, and it's your secret, but this poem today speaks of happiness....hugs and smiles, wishing you a lovely day and weekend ahead. Thank you for this write and read, as it is one of my favorites of yours. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, This was a delight to read, a keeper. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some days are good |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Maureen, these words sound so true of a heart that has been touched somehow; I am so glad you shared what you feel, it has given much hope to what a tomorrow can bring, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"brake a mood"... I LIKE that play on words, m'dear! |
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