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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2004-08-25 01:06 PM

I run
  I hide
     And still you find me

Alone I fade
   Alone I weep
     And yet you won't let me go

Still I find shadows
   Still I test the deep
     But your face is always there

Hurt I bleed
   Pain never ending
     Yet still you cling

Scars that won't fade
   Cuts that won't heal
      Callous inflictions of your love

I run
   I hide
      Still...you find me

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-08-25 01:06 PM

oh Paula, I felt this. This cuts deep.
very well done, and hugs to you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-08-25 01:33 PM

Paula, maybe it's time to wear a garlic necklace?

Hugs to you.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2004-08-25 01:45 PM

"I run
  I hide
     And still you find me

Alone I fade
   Alone I weep
     And yet you won't let me go

Still I find shadows
   Still I test the deep
     But your face is always there"

oh I like this one a lot

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

4 posted 2004-08-25 02:48 PM

Maybe you can get into a witness protection program?

-glider-

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-08-26 04:36 AM

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-08-26 04:51 AM

Very nice writing paula..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Buffalo girl won't you come out tonight..come out tonight...(George Bailey~It's A Wonderful Life)

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2004-08-26 07:17 AM

good writing, sad but good

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-08-26 07:36 AM

good write, could almost visulize you running

Liked the format as well.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2004-08-26 01:10 PM

Thanks y'all and Glider? LMAO at the Witness Protection Program

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-08-29 04:47 AM

Nice writing...James

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